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Thursday, March 17, 2016
Show Not Tell By Eden M
As I clean the dirty tables of McDonald’s, I hear the sound of a door opening and peer out the glass door. Business men and women carry their briefcases and books into the restaurant with ease. People of New York creating a wave of noise and footsteps behind them. As the doors swing shut, the noise becomes muffled. The chatter of politics can be heard as I walk over to the sink. I take my grimy cloth and soak it in the pink, soapy water. The greying water jumps up and hits me in the face. I grimace and reach for a towel. The towel feels dry and soft as I dry my face. I continue working until my arms begin to glisten with a sheen of sweat. I decide then to take my leave. I open the doors and walk into the streets of hot New York.
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Eden M,
Term 1 Week 7,
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Love your writing Eden ;)
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